[文法] 賴水信P.118例1

[roylu91 (Roy)]

Bob being graded as one of the top-ten student on campus is quite an exciting
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event among all of us.
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答案是a  改為Bob's being

但我在寫的時候覺得沒什麼錯
Bob (being graded as one of the top-ten student on campus) is quite an ....
s (who is graded as one of the top-ten student on canpus )+o

請大家指教

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推 AssistantR:原句應該是Bob who is graded as..
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