推 keita:應該是ideal吧?! 70.27.211.62 04/05
Most teenagers are already having boyfriends or girlfriends. I think that a
boyfriend is a friend that is not only intimat with body, but is also a close
acquaitance. However, a boyfriend is not similar as a husband, whom I am
going to depend on. Thus, my idea for a boyfriend is unrealistic therefore my
idea boyfriend must have to be fun, gentle, and handsome.
Since I will want to spend lots of time with my boyfriend, he has to be fun,
too. Here, I am going to tell you why he has to be a fun person. First, there
is no sense of hanging around a man who bores you and even makes you upset.
Second, a fun guy would know where to relax, when to play, what to do, and
how to have fun. Doesn't it sound wonderful? Third, usually what makes a man
fun is his sense of humor. I love humor, it brings out the positive things in
life, and it takes out the sadness.
All the women and girls love gentlemen who are concerned our needs and wants.
I always wish my boyfriend will be a gentleman, and his eyes would not move
away from me. He would be the first to find out when I am sick and depressed.
I believe that romance is made out of attentive care from relizing my favors
by himself so he can pretend a big surprise for me. A gentelmen should always
make me feel contented and satisfied.
Boys like to pick a pretty woman so I would also like to pick a handsome man.
Here are the clues, six feet tall, good body shape, a bright smile with white
teeth, and a pair of pretty bright eyes. A face like Tom Clouse and a body
like Brad Pitt would do.
Now, do you get the picture of my idea boufriend?
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