推 ethaniris:感覺還不錯 不過 文法要注意一下喔 09/28 11:27
→ kicho:到底是angel還是angle???? 09/29 23:46
One day I heard a voice from the sky
Sound happily and lively make me smile
I think that is angle singing in the sky
I think it is angle’s voice
One day I heard a voice from the sky
Like to pray and bless I always fun
I think that is angle singing in the sky
I think it is angle’s voice
She said don’t cry, my little child
I’ll forever with you and pray for you
When you feel alone you’ll hear my voice
An angle’s voice from the sky
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