Re: [創作] I ACCEPT

[istelle (N NN￾N)]

文法有點點小錯誤，簡單更正


※ 引述《guessX3 ()》之銘言：
: http://www.wretch.cc/blog/guessx3&article_id=4871262
: I ACCEPT
: 詞曲/純純
: I dont think you understand what I thought
: I dont even know the reason of your leave
I don't even know the reason you left

原文I dont even know the reason of your leave
如果你用這樣的句型，它的意思會變成︰
我甚至不知道你請假的原因
在這個句型中leave是名詞，請假的意思
離開是一個動作，應該用verb cum past tense

: I know you did your best to explain
: I trust youI believe you that unclear reason

I trust you
I believe your unclear reason


原文I believe you that unclear reason
犯了直接翻譯謬誤
你是想說︰我相信你那些含糊的理由？或者是我相信你相信那些含糊的理由？

如果你要用你的，就必須用your，that就可以省略了


: you've left
: I accept
: Oh why did you choose that way
: Oh why can't I understand
: my baby....

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推 channelV:改成the reason why you leave比較好吧._.?
推 istelle:the reason why you leave這句話也有一些語病
→ istelle:因為離開已是事實，理論上應該用過去式left
→ istelle:the reason是用來解釋why,所以再加上why就是重複使用
→ istelle:tell me the reason you left =tell me why did you leave
→ istelle:原則來說這樣
推 channelV:可以遷就曲改成我那行的形式吧 畢竟是歌詞
→ channelV:最重要的是傳達中心思想...