[求譯] 幾句英文句子

[YOB (努力 衝刺)]

求中譯／英譯：中譯英


屬句子／段落：段落


我的試譯：

 我們的愛情~很平凡~~~很簡單.
 Our love is ordinary and simple…….

 沒有浪漫的邂逅，但是~我們有相遇的緣分
 Without romantic encounter, but we are with feeling of affinity.

 沒有激情的火花，但是~我們有相知的同心
 Without passionate sparks, but we are of one mind.

 相識、相依，現在我們決定相守一輩子
 To know each other…… then we promise to be with each other until the last
 moment.


提問：因為覺得好像翻得還不夠貼切，所以想請問大家這幾句有沒有比更好的英文翻譯，
      謝謝各位。




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※ 編輯: YOB             來自: 59.121.209.46        (03/09 22:50)
推 andy20419:our love is ordinary, simple.
→ andy20419:without romantic encounter,
→ andy20419:feeling of affinity brought us together.
→ andy20419:without spark of passion,
→ andy20419:we are of one mind to know each other
→ andy20419:knowing, counting on each other,
→ andy20419:we promise the rest of our life to each other.
→ andy20419:我覺得我好像翻得滿糟的= =