※ 引述《ohbala (噢!我不是拔辣!)》之銘言：
先把文法明顯有錯的挑出來，文意等你修好再說
動詞時態和一個句字不要二個動詞是基本的吧
: Well, there are some factors. It is just come to idea. I was in San Francisco
: publicized Lust Caution. I meet an author by Taking Woodstock in TV station.
^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^ met ^^ ????
: We were attending TV program together. When I was make a recording on
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: videotape finished, he spends two minute to introduce this story with me. I
^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^spent ^^^^
: was interested. When he told me about this story, I was interested for this
: idea about 1969 years. Specially, I already make 6 tragedies. It is time to
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: change I want to make a comedy, and therefore I read original fiction. I have
^^ needs conj ^^冠詞 ^^^^
: decided right now.
^^^^^^^不對 ^^^ away
: The Eco-village has most purpose that we should devote to do environmental
: protection. We should stop polluting and make good use of nature. All the
: building in this village face to south and there has a glasses window. In
^^s ^^^ ^^
: summer, the glasses window can help heat ventilation .In winter, the glasses
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: window can help keep warm. So we don’t have to use air conditioner. All of
而且為什麼玻璃「房」是window?
: materials are nature. For example, shell, argil and paper brick. We use solar
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: energy to furnish electricity. Every family has reservoir which collects
^^ a
: rains. About toilet, we don’t flush. It makes use of sawdust which will be
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: covered. It is not only reduced odor but also becomes organic fertilizer. The
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: Eco-village is build of environmental protection idea. It is not only use of
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: useful resources but also environmental protection and conserves energy.
你很喜歡在is後面加動詞 ^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^
要用動詞還是名詞選一個吧
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