[請益] 幫我修一下一分鐘口試稿

[turnoff11 (運動傷害)]

學生要去考國中的英資班

有一分鐘的口試

題目是Why should you choose me?


以下是我幫他寫的稿子

怕有錯誤的字及文法

麻煩各位高手幫我看一下囉

  I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar

as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school

five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English

has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the

name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the

first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which

makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish

I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the

chance to get further English knowledge. TKS


這個學生很優秀

很希望他能繼續深造

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      ╭╮      《襄兒》                                 ζvictorina◣
      ╰●    我走過山的時候山不說話，我路過海的時候海不說話；        
      ╭╮    我坐著的毛驢一步一步滴滴答答，我帶著的倚天喑啞。        
      ╰●    大家說我因為愛著神雕大俠，找不到所以在峨嵋安家；  ▁    
      ╭╮    其實我只是喜歡此地的霧，像十六歲那年綻放的煙花。▉襄▏  
      ╰●                            ——北大未名 AngleMiao    ▇      

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※ turnoff11:轉錄至看板 TeachEnglish                               06/21 20:07
推 noruas:這位國中生的程度很好@@""
→ noruas:I spend a lot of time on it.
→ noruas:=> I've put a lot of time into learning it.
推 noruas:I am always the one in the name of my school...
→ noruas:=> I am always the student sent by my school..
→ noruas:(也可以用 on behalf of.. 如果國中有教這個的話)
→ noruas:(in the name of 藉著..的名義)
→ noruas:I ever won the first prize in the county competition..
→ noruas:=> I won first prize in the county competition
→ noruas:I can keep it in my junior high school life..
→ noruas:=> I can keep up with it in junior high school
→ noruas:I desire => I hope
→ noruas:to get further English knowledge => get a better
→ noruas:knowledge of English