Re: [請益] 幫我修一下一分鐘口試稿

[astar (Rajagopal)]

:   I have learned English for about ten years. For me, English is as familiar
: as Chinese since I spend a lot of time on it. I go to the English cram school

I've studied English for ten years. Because I spend a lot of time
on English lessons, I am confident that my English skills are as good
as native speakers.

個人不喜歡 cram school 這個字眼。

: five days a week. I never complain of the busy learning days because English
: has become part of my life. Because of my effort, I am always the one in the

I take an average of five English lessons a week and never had any
complaint about such a busy schedule, possibly because English has
become a part of my life.

: name of my school to attend the English speech competition. I ever won the
: first prize in the county competition when I was grade 2. Teachers usually tell me that I have a talent for English, which
: makes me confident to learn it. I am learning English all the time, and I wish
: I can keep it in my junior high school life. I desire school would give me the
: chance to get further English knowledge. TKS

In the primary school days, I was often elected to attend
English competitions on behalf of my school.
For example, I won the first prize in a national English competition
when I was a primary two student. My past achievements in English
should serve as evidence that I am a gifted secondary student with
enough talent in managing laugnages.

I strongly believe I can make positive contributions to
the Gifted English Class of XXX Junior High School, and therefore I hope
I will be given the chance to join the rest of the outstanding students
of the Gifted Class next semester.

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※ 編輯: astar           來自: 111.248.16.175       (06/21 21:11)
推 noruas:原波改得好~~但我覺得不符合小六生的口吻(以及程度)
→ noruas:這樣反而讓人覺得這篇是別人寫的..學生只是照著背誦..
推 turnoff11:真的太強~謝謝兩位大大囉
→ hoch:不過我看過北市龍門國中英語資優班學生寫的作文，完全看不出
→ hoch:是國中生寫的。不過他們班上很多ABC之類的就是了。
→ hoch:龍門校刊上看到的。感覺成熟到比絕大部分英文很好的台灣大人
→ hoch:還好。