[求譯] 請問一個句子的翻法

[a1091100075 (小日本)]

求中譯／英譯：英譯

句子，原意大概是：

某公司今年前五月就達成了去年整年業績的70%。

我的試譯：

The company has achieved revenue as

much as 70% of last year's in the first five months of this year.

提問：請問有更好的翻法嗎??這個翻法怎麼看都會被電…

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→ hoch:The company's total sales figure is 70% more than that of
→ hoch:對不起重寫：
→ hoch:With only five months in 2010, the company's sales figure
→ hoch:already 70% of that in the entire 2009.
→ hoch:"is already"
推 noruas:The company's first-five-month sales this year
→ noruas:has capped 70% of last-year sales.