[文法] 這兩句文法正確嗎?

[supernatural (supernatural)]

She accidentally ate a carton of chocolate that your boss
want to give to  his client.

Her boss is very angry,but he don t know who eat chocolate.
He ordered that his employee work overtime.

請問這兩句這樣寫正確嗎?  有錯的話幫糾正  謝謝


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推 BAPExKAWS:she accidentally ate a box of chocolates that your
→ BAPExKAWS:boss wants to give to his client(s).
→ BAPExKAWS:Her boss is very angry, but he doesn't know what ate
→ BAPExKAWS:it. So he ordered his employees to work overtime.
→ BAPExKAWS:(第一句的your boss是不是要改成her boss?)