※ 引述《imbhan (逼逼)》之銘言：
: EDUCATION
: 09/2006~06/2010 FU JEN CATHOLIC UNIVERSITY,，Taipei，Taiwan
^^ ^^英文不用全形標點符號
: Major in business administration
一般都會寫出學位名稱，而不僅寫主修
B.A., Business Administration
: 09/2000~06/2006 Sacred Hearts High School，Douliou，Yunlin
: EXPERIENCE
: 07/2009~05/2010 Election Study Center，National Chengchi University
: Phone interviewer
: ●Investigated Taiwan's electoral system and the election behavior（調查台灣選
^^^^^^^^^^^^ 沒有the
: 舉制度和選舉行為）
光看字會以為你是調查局的 XD
Researched Taiwan's ...
: ● Understood the populace's idea in Taiwan by telephone 利用電話訪問台灣各
: 地民眾的想法
Performed telephone interviews to understand...
: 04/2007~08/2007 WATAMI TAIWAN CO., LTD(Japanese Casual Restaurant)
^^加空格
: Part-time employee
: ●Worked 20 hours per week
: ●Served the customers and maintained the clean of the restaurant
restaurant hygiene
: ●Trained on and used excellent customer service practices in fast paced，work
: environment.
: EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
: 09/2004~06/2005 Leader;，Volleyball Team of Association
: 09/2005~05/2006 Marketing Planner，Service Club(企劃組成員)
: 09/2007~06/2008 Marketing Planner，FJU-Chiayun
: COMPUTER/LANGUAGE SKILLS
: ●MS Word、MS Excel、MS Powerpoint、Adobe、Outlook
^^^^^Adobe甚麼? Photoshop? Acrobat?
MS Word, excel... 可簡稱為 MS Office Suite
: ●Windows operating system
: ●Fluent in English，Excellent in Taiwanese
^^^^^^ 真的嗎? Fluent只比native低一級耶
: HONORS
: 2010 Champion，Graduation thesis(畢業專題第一名)
1st place in graduation thesis competition (我也不確定有無此說法)
: 好像有點亂耶 不好意思 因為還在打草稿
加油
: 想請問大家我的文法或單字的錯誤在哪呢
: 前面還有基本的個人資料
: 想請問這樣的履歷會不會太少了阿
: 還可以再加些什麼呢
履歷太過簡單，平凡無奇，可以寫得更漂亮一點
"performed telephone interviews..." 可改為 "interviewed 3,000+ telephone
respondents on..." (自己大概民調過幾個人寫進去)
"worked 20 hours per week" 可改為 "maintained 20 hour/wk workload concurrent
with course and extracurricular requirements"
"served the customers" 可改成 "personally responsible for the service of
15 tables" (自己負責幾桌就寫幾桌)
: 不好意思謝謝大家!!
: 還想請問一下
: QUALIFICATION重點是要寫些什麼阿
人家qualification是要甚麼我也不知道，可能是與工作相關之學經歷證照吧~
: 不好意思!!!
拋磚引玉
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say something. -Plato (427BC-347BC)
Plato is boring. -Frederich Nietzsche (1844-1900)
Nietzsche was stupid and abnormal. -Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910)
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