→ quicknick:我的建議是把國中三年的文法全部讀通,並且了解每個字的 07/11 22:40
→ quicknick:詞性,還有時式的問題;五大基本句型弄清楚 07/11 22:40
推 christiano:這...改起來很麻煩的... 07/11 22:58
推 ajia0818:這些逐字翻成中文 就好讀多了@@ 你有太多基本文法的問題 07/12 07:03
由於我的英文程度實在很差...
我自己寫完這篇後，念起來覺得很不順，
也知道自己有非常多的錯誤要改。(只是不知道怎麼改 Q_Q)
因為是要用說的，
所以想請教板上的達人幫我修改一下，
讓口說更順一點...
謝謝大家了!
When I was a little boy.I was very naughty child.
One day,I went to go fishing at my home nearby pond.
I usually sat under the tree,then wait to fishing.
When I stood and throw the bait,my hip collide with behind the tree.
Then I fall in the pond.
The pond's water was very deep and I felt fear.
Therefore I was loud shouted "Help me"!
At this moment has a man,he jumped heroic and salvage me.
I thought immediately he was a hero,and he was so shine in my eyes.
覺得真的很差，請用力鞭我，沒關係!
這樣我才能進步，謝謝。
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