Re: [請益] 修改句子

[tengharold (RoadMan_A)]

可直接拿掉 It could embed more compared...
但是
※ 引述《yshihyu (yshihyu)》之銘言：
: our experimental results have shown that the proposed method provided a
: better way to hide data. It could embed 112 KB–400 KB more compared with
                ^^^^ compress? encode? hide + data 有點負面意義
: other reversible method that can contain highest capacity and keep a high
                   ^^^^^^ 單數的話前面要有冠詞吧
                          ^^^^^^^^^^^^^是other reversible method can contain
還是the proposed method can contain
                                           ^^^^^^^highest 也很怪
proposed method+reversible method=2個method; highest 比較3個或更多
: visual quality.
: 我想把 112 KB–400 KB 拿掉要怎樣改那部分句子才順?
: 謝謝

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→ hoch:that can contain ...那邊的確不知道想說什麼。
→ hoch:另外，our results show that 用現在式就可以。
→ hoch:the proposed method provides ....也要用現在式。不然你的
→ hoch:只在過去比較好，意思式現在表現就不好。
→ hoch:        ...意思是...
→ tengharold:恩恩h大想的比我細，我只想"過去跑的研究=過去式" :p