推 cspy:用別的辭當主詞就可以避掉一些I, 還是說連貫起來 07/18 18:40
推 ajia0818:因為你是一句一句想才會這樣 另外..my interest is dog!? 07/18 20:54
→ monkey0524:抱歉 中英文轉換有點問題 = = 07/18 20:56
→ tengharold:其實文法錯誤還不少... 07/19 23:19
Hello,my name is XXX. I’m glad to introduce myself to you. I graduated
from XXXXXXX University last year and I just discharge from army as a second
lieutenant. I’m a platoon leader in army and I had learned a lot of things
from army. I’m a easy-going and optimistic person. My interest is baseball ,
table tennis and dog. I am also a member of baseball team in university. I
have many experience of part-time job because I have to pay living expense by
myself. My Japanese language is certificated and I plan to get certification
of English because I’m interesting in English. Except for language, I also
know about computer hardware. When my friend got some problem, they always
ask me for help and I always pleased to help them. I hope I can find a job
that suited to me and get some work experience.
Thanks for your listening.
這是面試要用的英文自介
因為英文說跟寫的程度比較不好
覺得整篇下來I 很多 不知道有沒有辦法讓I少一點
麻煩各位專家幫我修改一下了順便挑出問題點
謝謝
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