推 noruas:hello=安安 07/18 23:46
→ noruas:自傳第一行不能那樣寫吧 07/18 23:47
→ noruas:(安安,我叫XXX 19歲~~) 很怪吧 07/18 23:47
對吼
前面幾句很順的就照原po的看過去了
都忘了這是自傳= = 謝指正
※ 編輯: ajia0818 來自: 220.135.229.7 (07/19 00:43)
推 monkey0524:非常感謝 07/19 09:59
※ 引述《monkey0524 ()》之銘言：
: Hello,my name is XXX. I’m glad to introduce myself to you. I graduated
: from XXXXXXX University last year and I just discharge from army as a second
: lieutenant. I’m a platoon leader in army and I had learned a lot of things
: from army. I’m a easy-going and optimistic person. My interest is baseball ,
: table tennis and dog. I am also a member of baseball team in university. I
: have many experience of part-time job because I have to pay living expense by
: myself. My Japanese language is certificated and I plan to get certification
: of English because I’m interesting in English. Except for language, I also
: know about computer hardware. When my friend got some problem, they always
: ask me for help and I always pleased to help them. I hope I can find a job
: that suited to me and get some work experience.
: Thanks for your listening.
: 這是面試要用的英文自介
: 因為英文說跟寫的程度比較不好
: 覺得整篇下來I 很多 不知道有沒有辦法讓I少一點
: 麻煩各位專家幫我修改一下了順便挑出問題點
: 謝謝
幾句可以改寫一下
I'm XXX. xx years old.
I graduated from XXXXXXX University last year.
Easy-going,optimistic personality.
One of my favorite is baseball,I was a baseball player in college
Computer skill is also my strength,it happened very often that
repair computer in my friend's room.
Besides,I got qualification in Japanese and next target is English.
反正前面多寫些自己會的能力或者介紹自己人格特質
太多過去生活經歷體驗可以不用寫 公司不會在意吧
很多兼差經驗可以放後面說
Frankly speaking,to make ends meet myself,many experiences of
part-time job in my past.
最後寫些
希望可以一起加入你們公司與你們奮鬥之類的
應該就可以了
大概寫一下
只是想說可以朝這個方式寫
就可以少掉不少I了
少掉不少內容 因為我不認識你= = 不曉得你其他的事
應該沒什麼大誤= = 我自己覺得啦 呵呵
有錯請高手指正~0.0
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