[請益] 我寫了英文感謝函給雇主 請幫我看一下是不是需要修改

[gigiwu (PTT)]

各位英文版的版友好

日前我錄取了一家外商公司，接著就要通知他們何時可以上工

何時可以離開目前公司  這家公司也距離我家只有七公里，天啊 七公里

也太近了，當然我的興奮之情溢於言表 如果想參考我的面試過程

可以參考salary 搜尋我的id就可以了 看可以不可以幫助大家一點

我寫了一封感謝函 謝謝他們的賞識 並也將通知他們何時我可以就職

內容如下:  可否幫我看一下 是不是 有需要修改的地方

Dear

Nice to have this great chance to see you again on Friday, I think it is still

in exciting mood to work with you in the following days.

I look for a good copmany located in sourther Taiwan even close my house ,

it is also my dream if I want to live my country and work around here

A little suprise for me there is a such international company found here

for 20 years history and hide behind police station , Thank you for your

positive approval,

I will pay my efforts and keep in good condition to learn from you to

understand xxx business field.

I will discuss with my current company to make everything clear for my

present position and confirm what time I will be on board ,

I will  inform and have a discussion with you by next week.

Thanks again for your approval .


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