[請益] 自我介紹的文法是否有誤

[flyflute (彩蝶絢麗)]

請板上的大大幫個忙，幫我看一下我的自我介紹文法是不是有錯，

幫忙糾正一下，謝謝大家的幫忙囉!

Good morning. I am very glad to introduce myself to you.

My name is ●●. This year I graduated from ●●.

I am a girl with outgoing and lively personality.

In addition to class’ activities, I always joined club and took a part-time job in my free time.

Especially, one of my part-time jobs is about customs service.

It thought me how to communicate with people, how to reflect those problems and solve it.

I like these kind jobs. Please give me a chance.

Thanks for listen myself introduction.

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