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原po應有法律背景，且英文用字下過一番功夫，所以我可能評的細一點
用PTT評起來好累~~寫的累，看得更累...
: As we all know, we have one big trouble recently. Maybe it can be described as
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^生硬 ^^^^^不必maybe
: ''the huge typhoon in Judiciary''. Judge 蕭 - the Judge of Supreme Court -
我會寫成 "a huge typhoon in the Judiciary" = [台灣]法界的一個大風暴
a 不具指定性，the 則具指定性 the^^^ a^^^
Hsiao中文人名有固定音譯，勿中英混用
- a judge in ...
代表蕭是大法官"之一"，如用the則變成"唯一" ^^^
e.g. Ma is the president of Taiwan 馬是台灣總統 (只有一個)
Ma is a president attending the summit 馬是參加高峰會的總統 (之一)
另外"大法官"好像是譯為 [Supreme Court] Justice
: influence illegal Judge 高 in Taiwan High Court on the case of
->illegally influence "非法" "影響"，不是illegal judge "非法" "高法官" XD
illegally influence Judge Kao in [the] Taiwan High Court 是高法官在高院，還是
非法關說在高院? 有點不清楚。如用逗號(或其他方式)分隔就清楚知道是高法官在高院。
->Judge Kao, a judge in the High Court
on the case of -> IN the case of
: 蕭's son that he got away without looking after someone who was hurt in car
Hsiao's son. 上面講關說案，下面要講蕭子之案，最好另起新句
got away without looking 應該是 hit-and-run (肇逃) 吧?
Hsiao's son was charged with hit-and-run "蕭子被告肇逃"應該就可以了
或是講細一點: Hsiao's son was found guilty in a hit-and-run case at the
district level, and he was on appeal at the high court. 蕭子一審被判肇逃
有罪，那時正在上訴高院。(不負責英文法律名詞)
: accident that he made. Basically speaking, as the professional viewpoint,
as the professional viewpoint = from a professional viewpoint
: hit-and-run charge is not felony, and the guilty driver maybe punished as fine
->A hit-and-run is not A felony 單數名詞要有冠詞
felony, and->felony, AS... 代表因果關係 (as=因為)
: or short-term imprisonment. However,
^^^^^^^^^^"短期"不精準，我記得"1年以下"就不算felony
... as the crime is punishable by fine or imprisonment of less than a year.
: What the intention dose Judge 蕭 have to involve in the scandal, and he care
: nothing about how great price he should pay for it.Reportedly he hope his son
這句到這裡不太懂原PO要說甚麼^^
: who hit-and-run guy is can be pronounced not guilty, and this guy can take part
"his son who hit-and-run guy" 文法不通 ^^^^^^^^是誰?
: in the qualification text of Judge and Procurator annually without any record
exams for ^^^^^^^^^^Prosecutor? Solicitor?
: of previous crime. However we can find it is out of the question by reviewing
record of previous crime=criminal record
^^what is "it"? not guilty? taking
exams? criminal records?
: the evidence of this case.
: Sympathy we have for a father with anxiety about his son's trouble, the glory
全天下只有星際大戰的尤達大師可以這樣倒裝 "Sympathy we have" XD
->We have sympathy...
a father's anxiety for ... / a father who is anxious for 都比較好
: of status is not his own property nevertheless, and he have no right to order
the glory of status? he HAS
: Judge高 to obey what the instruction he give. As a member of judiciary work,
his instructions. of the Judiciary,
: his behavior brings shame on whole worker in territory of judiciary.
to the whole Judiciary.
這裡Judiciary用兩次，所以第一次可能要再改為 As a Supreme Court Justice, his...
文法問題還蠻多的，但是看得出來原PO在單字上下了番功夫
加油~
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