作者endlesssad (無盡傷悲)
看板Eng-Class
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時間Sun Sep 5 18:32:29 2010
Cultivating a Hobby
Cultivating a hobby is very important for everyone. During long lives,
we can keep our enthusiasm with what we are interested in. It entertains us
in usual days and let us gain power quickly from frustration.
How to cultivate a hobby? First, we must choose something that we can
love for a long time such as a hobby. Second, the thing should be able to
inspire us when we feel upset. That is to say, gambling or speeding may be
exciting, but they are unhealthy and bring terrible outcome. Finaly, after
choosing a hobby, we should always keep in touch with it as our best friend
so that we can get consolation from that.
Take me for example, I like Japanese culture very much. The first step,
I started to study Japanese. Then, I watch Japanese dramas and programs. It
is dramatically helpful to realize Japanese deeply. Recently, I began to read
traveling books about Japan in order to go sightseeing in Japan in the future.
I spent a lot of time in cultivating my hobby. But it is worthy! When I
feel tired of hard work, I can relax by practising my hobby. A good hobby will
accompany me without leaving me alone. I will try my best to continue
discoverying Japanese culture.
Everyone should find out a hobby for his life. That makes life colorful
and happy.
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