作者joysmalling (唷斯)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 英文作文
時間Thu Sep 9 23:08:13 2010
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題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to
specialize in one specific subject.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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作文
After graduating from school, the final work people have to do is to find a
job. When the topic comes about "it is better to have broad knowledge of many
academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject", I guess most
of people would disagree with that because to specialize in one specific
subject is much easier to get a job. However, I agree with that it is better
to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects for a few reasons.
First of all, having broad knowledge of many academic subjects can be more
competitive. For example, my first job is doing research. I used the
knowledge I had learned from college and I thought it is enough. But, as a
big dissert happened to Taiwan, our research institution changed the plan on
research. Now, I have to learn the factors of how the dissert happens. These
are so unfamiliar to me and also learning the new knowledge takes time. I
have to work harder than people who already know that.
Second, having broad knowledge of many academic subjects can make us consider
things more complete. When we face a problem, if we have broad knowledge, we
can think for many views and make a better decision. For instance, I joined a
studying group, every time we discussed the homework which the professor gave
to us, students from different department would have different ideas and
answers. Therefore, I think if I have broad knowledge, I could understand the points others give to me and I could think
more complete.
The last reason is that only having broad knowledge can lead to specific
subject. We study at our young age, and how can that be possible for us to
know which one is more useful? Therefore, I think the only way for us to
choose the suitable job is to study many subjects. Having broad knowledge of
academic subjects can help us to choose the specific subject that we interest
in.
For the three reasons, to be more competitive, to think more complete, and to
be easy to choose jobs. I agree with that it is better to have broad
knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific
subject.
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※ 編輯: joysmalling 來自: 140.112.4.183 (09/09 23:09)
推 ventress:第一段第二句 後面改成 enables you to get a job easier 09/09 23:49
→ ventress:這樣我覺得比較好 09/09 23:50
→ ventress:第二段第一句建議改成 can make you be more competitive 09/09 23:51
→ ventress:可以問什麼是big dessert happened to Taiwan嗎 09/09 23:56
→ ventress:how the dessert happened who already knew that 09/09 23:59
→ ventress:第三段第一句 more completely 09/09 23:59
→ ventress:we can think from many points of view 09/10 00:00
→ ventress:I think if I had a broad scope of knowledge, 09/10 00:02
→ ventress:the concepts others gave me and,,,,,,,completely. 09/10 00:03
→ ventress:第四段最後一句 that we are interested in. 09/10 00:05
→ ventress:最後一段 completely, and to choose jobs easily, 09/10 00:09
→ ventress:大概就這樣 以上僅供參考 09/10 00:10
→ HamalAri:graduated 畢業了 ／graduating 將畢業 09/10 00:13
推 PinkQQ:隨意看了Second這一段，很多Comma splice的錯誤 09/10 01:09
→ PinkQQ:就是你子句和子句之間僅用comma隔開，沒有連接詞或關代等 09/10 01:10
推 tengharold:推d大用Google Docs，排版清楚多了! 09/10 03:18
→ joysmalling:非常謝謝你們!!! 09/10 09:11