[文法] 這一句英文改寫

[mater2004 (mater)]

Folks who replace red meat with fish are naturlly cutting down their intake

of saturated fat, which the body easily converts into artery-choking plaques.


問題:

1.which 是指哪個部份??




我改寫成這樣有沒有問題

2.Folks replacing red meat with fish are naturally cutting down their intake....


3.Folks replace red meat with fish, cutting down their intake ....
                                ↑↑↑
                                這邊可以補什麼關代嗎?
                                (補了是不是會變成fish的形容詞)





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※ 編輯: mater2004       來自: 111.252.85.98        (10/19 20:04)
→ c23328:which 指 saturated fat
→ c23328:2我覺得不順，但仍請高手解釋。我傾向用folks that replace
→ c23328:3的寫法已跟1的意思不同了。
→ c23328:3的範圍比1大
→ mater2004:3的意思哪裡不一樣?? 還有3的naturally不知道擺哪裡
→ c23328:原文：吃魚不吃紅肉的人。
→ c23328:3：人們吃魚不吃紅肉
→ c23328:原文前段是原因，3的後段似乎變成原因。
→ hoch:Some people replace red meat with fish, thereby cutting
→ hoch:down their intake ......
→ huggie:2我覺得ok但是覺得原本的較清楚