Re: [求譯] 英文演講稿，懇請大家幫忙看看文法

[tengharold (RoadMan_A)]

※ 引述《caelia0711 (旗子)》之銘言：
: 求英譯：中譯英
: 屬段落：
: 若有一天，世界成了無止盡的黑暗，週遭是令人幾乎窒息的寂靜，你該如何面對？
: 小時候，因為一次高燒，她失明、失聰；然而，她卻克服生理上的缺陷與枷鎖，
: 活出精采的人生。她，一位生命勇者──我的偶像，海倫‧凱勒。
: 她是我的偶像，教會我珍惜生命並勇敢面對困難。敬凱倫凱勒──一位傳奇般的
: 生命勇士！
手癢，大家請鞭
If one day, your world became an endless darkness surrounded by suffocating
silence, how would you face it?
A fever took her sight and hearing at a young age, but she conquered her
handicap, broke out of her shackles, and lived out her life as a shining
inspiration to others. She is a true warrior, and my idol; she is Helen Keller.

She is my idol; she taught me to treasure life and courageously face my own
difficulties. To Helen Keller - a legendary warrior of life!

: 我的試譯：
: If the world becomes completely darkness, and surroundings is suffocating
: slience.How do you confront?She lost her sight and hearing because of a
: high fever in childhood.However, she comquer the physiological flaw and the
: shackes, create a plendid life .She is a life worrior, and my favorite idol,
: Helen Keller.
: She is my favorite idol, and teaches me treasure the life and confront
: difficult courageous.Hail, Helen Keller, a legendary life worrior!
: 提問：
: 因為只譯好這兩段，所以就先將開頭及結尾放上來了。
: 想請大家幫忙看看文法是否有誤、單字的用法是否正確，
: 若有任何意見請告訴我，非常感謝您的指教！謝謝！

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'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life
Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die
        -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve


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推 hoch:推。有時候先寫好中文再逐字翻成英文，比直接用英文寫還難。
推 caelia0711:非常感激整篇都翻譯了，謝謝！