[求譯] 聯繫方式的英文..

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我想在網站上寫

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通常比較專業的寫法是怎樣寫呢@@?

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※ 編輯: pooi            來自: 119.59.131.172       (01/24 14:15)
推 heziying:If you would like to make an appointment or learn
→ heziying:more, please contact us via MSN at XXX or text
→ heziying:message at XXX. We will respond as soon as possible.
→ heziying:learn more是獲得更多訊息 也可以說learn more about us
→ heziying:或learn more about our services
→ pooi:thank you very much!!!!!
推 libai8968:推H大的翻譯非常專業