※ 引述《arthush0905 (冰焰)》之銘言：
: 求英譯：
: 屬段落：
: 我的試譯：
: 新年新希望
: New Year's Resolutions
: 親愛的老師及同學們大家好
: Dear Teacher and classmates
改成 ladies & gentlemen 是否較好
(至少不要用 "teacher" 來稱呼老師, teacher是職業不是稱謂)
: 非常謝謝這學期能有這個機會參加這個課程
: I really appreciate the opportunity to join the course this semester.
: 因為自覺我在英文會話與聽力方面的能力很差，所以一直很害怕接觸這個領域
: Because I aware my English conversation and listening very poor,
: so I am scared of access the domain.
I've been avoiding it because I have poor English
speaking and listening skills.
: 所以我的指導教授建議我可以參加這門課來增加我的能力
: But my advisor suggests I can join the class to improve my capability.
suggested me to take this class
: 但是因為我不是本科的學生，所以之前一直很焦慮
: Because I am not the undergraduate students, I am very anxiety prior to this.
為什麼不是大學部就會很焦慮? (還是你是要說不是外文系所的?)
I've been very anxious before the class began.
: 所以我在這學期有兩個目標
: So I have two goals in this semester.
: 第一，我希望我能在這堂課中盡力做好，也能增加我的英文溝通能力
: Fist, I whish I can do my best in this class
: and enhance my capability about English communication.
wish 通常表不可能實現的願望, 用 hope 吧
I will do my best in this class and I hope I'll enhance my English
communication skills.
: 第二，我之前有過大約一年的工作經驗
: Secondly, I've been working in the psychiatric unit for about one years.
如果你現在已經沒有工作就了就不要用 have been working
: 而現在是個全職的碩二學生
: Now I am a full-time student in my second-year master's program.
: 所以這學期，我希望我可以在七月畢業
: So in this semester, I wish I can expect to graduate in July.
So my goal is to graduate in July.
: 而這也是我最大的願望
: And it is my largest expected.
greatest wish.
: 非常謝謝大家
: Thank you very much.
: 如果有什麼需要改進的地方，也請大家多多指正
: If there is any need for improvement, please tell me.
: Please do not hesitate to give me some advice.
Please feel free to correct me and give me some suggestion for improvement.
: Thank you very much.
: 提問：
: 因預計要進行三分鐘之講稿
: 不知這樣是否通順或文法上是否正確
: 懇請大家給我一些建議與修正
: 謝謝大家
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※ 編輯: alixia 來自: 67.170.223.39 (03/06 12:53)