[求譯] 關於學校與科系的說法

[kazunari617 (和也)]

求英譯：我決定參加○○大學○○研究所的推甄考試


屬句子


我的試譯：（求譯「段落」者，本欄請勿留白）

I decided to take the graduate school screening test of Department of ○○

of ○○ University.


提問：

我覺得我試譯的段落一連出現了3個of很怪，

不知道改成下面這樣會不會比較好？

I decided to take the graduate school screening test of ○○ Department

of ○○ University.


不知道有沒有其他更通順的翻譯方式？

謝謝各位板友！



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推 sheenalight:我都寫screening test of O department of O uni....
推 biingru:Department of XXX, University of XXX
推 heziying:不喜歡用三個of就用:
→ heziying:screening test of the xx University Department of xx
→ heziying:你可能也可以用xxDepartment 但那要看是哪一個dept
推 hoch:一定要強調『甄試』嗎？我覺得 "screening test" 應該很難想
→ hoch:像的到推甄。不如直接說
→ hoch:After discussing with my parents, I finally decided to
→ hoch:apply to the master program of chemistry at NTU.