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這是我剛寫的作文
我想應該看得出我的程度
I would talk about two things about my recently reading.
One is a news digested from Taipei Times concerning the USA's aims sales to
Taiwan, which involves the changes of relationship between the USA and China.
A report issued by the scholars and masters in the field of international
relations of Far East Asia said that it comes with the increasing contact
between the cross-strait, the bilateral relation of USA and China will face
the new rethinkings.Should the USA, out of the domestic need, continue to
sale the aims sales to Taiwan??
The think tank think that the answer maybe is not.
The aims sales may create a "vicious circle".
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我覺得我遇到瓶頸了
因為沒有受過外文系程度的作文訓練
我覺得 我在遣詞用字上 常常隨心所至 寫出一堆連自己也不知道好不好的文章來
我看我自己的問題是 1.字彙量不足 沒法明確表達自己的意思
2.對單字的使用，了解不夠，影響寫作
3.常常有文法的小錯誤 像是單數動詞少加s 冠詞用錯an a
需要常常注意一下小地方。
但我自己常可以感覺到，隨著閱讀量增廣，我常常可以回過頭來修改自己的作文。
只是，在下筆的當下，我常常沒有什麼譜，會寫出什麼東西，自己也不知道。
問一下高手版友，你覺得我有必要請個經過外文系訓練的英文寫作家教嗎
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