[請益] cover letter 內容,麻煩指正與指導...

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麻煩各位了第一次寫Cover letter,想要應徵德商的約聘行政助理

Dear Miss Lin:

I think that C.B. (Certification Body) is a specialized and potential region.
XXX is the top in this region. There are the completed organization,
excellent corporate culture and colleague competition. I am writing in
response to your occupation for a administrate assistant on the website of
104 bank. I know that to hand CB project or BSMI project is a huge challenge,
and I would do my best to assign every project.

I had gotten master degree in apply physics in the National Chung Cheng
University. I also did my research in the surface physics laboratory. I got
better understanding of Science. Additionally, I am an active person, who is
willing to learn new things that work needed, and believe that my ability is
suitable for the position.

I look forward to have an opportunity to interview with you. If you contact
me at 09xx-xxx-xxx or a mail, we could schedule an appointment. And I am
appreciated that you would find time to read this.

Sincerely,


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推 jacqueswu:第一段前兩句是指? 最後一段:If you think I am qualifi
→ jacqueswu:ed for the position, please give me a call. My conta
→ jacqueswu:ct phone number is 09xx. I look forward to an inter-
→ jacqueswu:view with you soon.
→ jacqueswu:or "I hope that I may have the pleasure of an inter-
→ jacqueswu:view at a time most convenient to you.
→ silenceblue:前兩句是說:我認為安規是一塊具有獨特與淺力的領域
→ silenceblue:而這家公司更是這個領域中的佼佼者,不知道有沒有寫錯