作者nov123 (nov123)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 兒童英文作文請幫忙修改!!
時間Mon Aug 8 22:35:43 2011
以下是我家小妹妹(小學五年級)寫的英文作文
內容是用她會的單字寫出來的
我有先看過一次,但是應該是有很多文法上的錯誤(我...英文太爛了><)
麻煩各位，可以幫我看一下嗎，感謝大家
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One day, the backpack bear joined the bouncing-ball camp.
The teacher of camp took all children to the zoo.
Backpack bear saw a lot of animals,alligators,elephants,dinosaurs,
gorilla and hummingbird.
Then backpack bear took a helicopter.
On the helicopter, he saw some happy hippo singing in the lake.
When backpack bear went to the zoo exit, he saw an astronaut buy a gumball
for a girl with beautiful fingers.
How is a fantastic day!
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推 ventress:How a fantastic day! 08/08 23:18
→ ventress:backpack bear 是指"背包熊"嗎? 08/08 23:19
→ nov123:是的唷!是她喜歡的一個玩偶^^ 08/08 23:47
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