作者hankevin (catch a wave~~~ @@)
看板Eng-Class
標題[文法] 幫忙看一下文法
時間Tue Sep 20 00:22:44 2011
Somehow, I was desperate to leave for Australia, but as closer as the
date to depart is coming, i feel like staying as longer as I can.
我想說的是:不知道怎麼回事 之前很想快點去AU, 但隨著離開的日子越來越接近
我卻很想待在台灣
請各位大大幫忙看一下文法有沒有錯,尤其是but那一句 怎麼改都怪怪的
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推 heziying:but the closer my departure date comes, the longer 09/20 12:39
→ heziying:對不起 逗點後是:the more I want to stay here as long 09/20 12:39
→ heziying:as I can (我是用你英文和中文表達的意思混在一起 XD) 09/20 12:40
→ heziying:as closer...as longer不通順 就用簡單的副詞/形容詞吧^^ 09/20 12:42
→ hankevin:感謝板大!~ 09/20 14:28