[求譯] 這樣文法可以嗎 ?

[cmkung (知道了吧 !)]

  Can you check resume for suggestion ?
  請幫我檢查履歷並給建議

  The process engineer resume check
   製程工程師履歷檢查

  Thank you very much give me a opportunity , resume on mail .
   很感謝你給我這個機會 , 履歷在郵件中

  以上這幾句文法可以嗎 ?


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→ hoch:不可以。尤其是第一和第二行，完全看不懂。
→ hoch:第三行最後也是。
→ priv:原po可以列出中文想表達的意思
※ 編輯: cmkung          來自: 125.231.32.153       (10/02 14:46)
→ hoch:Could you go over my resume and tell me what you think?
→ hoch:第二句我還是看不懂。
→ hoch:Thank you for giving me the opportunity to visit your
→ hoch:laboratory. My resume has been submitted. It is expected
→ hoch:to arrive at your office next Monday.