推 tengharold:I am not able to understand this +1 10/04 02:01
→ tengharold:一句話請勿包含太多重點。光看句構，主句是 a poster 10/04 02:02
→ tengharold:composed of different elements...are also important 10/04 02:03
→ tengharold:但這樣的主句不僅be動詞不對，內容也看不懂。 10/04 02:04
→ heziying:好像是兩句混在一起 是這樣子嗎? 一個是about a poster's 10/04 10:39
→ heziying:elements.另一個是about important functions 10/04 10:39
→ heziying:either make it into one sentence with tight logic, 10/04 10:40
→ heziying:or split it into 2 separate sentences ^^ 10/04 10:40
推 DarkD:目前看來是併在一起，但referent不明以及beV用錯導致整句 10/04 16:48
→ DarkD:distorted 10/04 16:48
→ DarkD:拆成兩句+連接詞: A poster is composed of different 10/04 16:49
→ DarkD:elements, and besides its main function to communicate 10/04 16:51
→ DarkD:information, others such as blablabla are also important 10/04 16:52
→ DarkD:這句兩個S根V。但你只寫出來S1根V2，V1根S2消失了 10/04 16:54
→ DarkD:也不是說消失，反正你沒很好地把兩個要傳達的意思揉合進單句 10/04 16:55
→ DarkD:還有一個問題是 main function應該是主，others應該是次 10/04 16:57
→ DarkD:但你卻用besides(通常是附加說明的概念)來帶出主，然後次 10/04 16:58
→ DarkD:概念就跑到句構中的主句.....so screwed= =" 10/04 16:58
→ ladyspider:哇啊啊~ 謝謝大家的指正! 10/08 02:22