推 goingon:謝謝你的幫忙! 11/05 16:45
※ 引述《goingon (無)》之銘言：
: I would talk about my friend, Sara. She is my college classmate. When I was
^ like to 這邊看起來是妳想介紹Sara跟妳的關係
: in my first year in college, my leg got hurt in a basketball game and I was
: unable to walk then. Moreover, I lived alone outside the school and my family
: was not there. It was a hard time. I was depressed(沮喪的) because I thought
: no one would help me. Surprisingly(出乎我預料的), Sara offered her helping hand
: (伸出援手). She rode a bicycle took me to classes and helped me with trivial
伸出援手=幫忙：Sara helped me / Sara gave me a hand
: things in my daily life(生活瑣事). That is really important to me. I will
生活瑣事=生活大小事：every little thing.
: never forget how generous she was when I was in need for someone’s help(在我
: 真的需樣幫助的時候).
: 括號的地方有查過然後選擇可能的用法，但不知道有沒有用對?
: 希望板上的大家可以幫我看看!
可以這樣寫，但文章有點不順…妳現在還是大學生嗎？還是已經畢業了？
I would like to talk about my friend, Sara, who was my college classmate.
During my first year in college, I hurted my leg in a basketball game
and I was unable to walk. Worse thing is that I lived offcampus alone.
It was a difficult time, coz i don't have family there. I was a freshman,
therefore I didn't have good friend. Surprisingly, Sara gave me great help by
riding me to school by bicycle, and also helped me on every little thing.
It touched me deeply. I will never forget how kind and generous she was
when i was in need.
可能還是有些文法錯誤？但我會這樣寫~
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