[請益] 文法改寫(過去完成)

[ncu1319 (.................)]

They had known each other for ten years when they got married.

他們彼此相識已經十年了才結婚



我看起來會想用主詞加上動作  才寫入時間


所以我想這樣改寫


They got married when they had know each other for ten years.


想請問版友這樣的改寫文法有任何錯誤嗎  謝謝~

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→ RuinAngel:They had known each other for ten years by the time
→ RuinAngel:they got married. 原po會不會嫌這樣太長XD
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