[求譯] 幾句英文的表達

[momoqmo ()]

筆者有許久沒使用英文了,想問一下這幾句的翻譯我這樣想是否正確?
或者有無更好的寫法呢?


在此團體中,他較Tom積極
He is active than Tom in the group.

他年長且我想他是比另一人聰明的
He is old and I think he is smarter than the other one.

當他在進行遊戲時常會失控
He usually out of control when he in a game.

我能找到比這更容易做的東西
I can find some thing easier than it

他是遲鈍的
He is beef witted

他不像其他學生那樣聰明
He is not smart as other/normal student.

當我們玩遊戲時,他將會很興奮,因而他將會失控
When we play games, he will very exciting, so he will out of control

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