[求譯] 健康檢查須請假一天

[lingz1024 (Brand new year)]

下周一我要去醫院做健康檢查預計需請假一天，

如果提早結束會盡快回來工作。


Next Monday I need to take probably one day off to go to hospital for

physical examination.

Will be back to work if it can ends earlier than expected.


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試著翻譯如上，
想請教文法和語意是否有錯誤的地方? 謝謝 :)


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→ Joules:1.probably是副詞，通常放動詞前；2.physical可數；3.如果
→ Joules:是email、熟人等較不正式場域，第二句缺主詞可；4.加"can"
→ Joules:是台式、中式英文用法
→ Joules:I may need to take a day off for a physical next Monday
→ Joules:Will be back to work if it ends earlier than expected.
推 Joules:語意表達無誤，翻得不錯。只有文法需要一些cosmetic tweak.
→ lingz1024:謝謝!!台式英文習慣真的很難改!
→ fybluebd:I wondered if a leave for physical examination
→ fybluebd:on Monday is possible.