[請益] 如何描述多個事物的各種結果?

[kawa0710 (反川內一)]

例如:

The result of A is α, the result of B is β, and the result of r is γ.

描述三樣事物的結果各自為何.

但我覺得在文章中相同句子結構重覆了好幾次, 看起來不好, 所以改成

The result of A is α, B whose result is β, and r the result of which is γ.

請問這樣改法, 是否正確以及正常?


感謝回答.

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