[請益] 一篇自由民主的文章

[JohnMayer (約翰梅爾)]

小弟最近練習寫約100出頭字的短文

以下是最近寫的一篇  請各位高手指教  謝謝

Freedom and Democracy Never Come Easy


Today is June 4th, 23rd anniversary of Tiananmen Square Protest which was the

most influential democracy movement in recent decades of China. As a people

live in Taiwan, the first democratic country in Asia, I feel lucky but never

take democracy for granted. Rewinding the history of Taiwan, the freedom of

speech, assembly and association were not gifted for Taiwanese before 1987.

After a sequence of protests, inside system and outside system, the

government eventually gave back these privileges to people. However, students

standing on the Tiananmen Square 23 years ago today were not as lucky as

protesters in Taiwan. Some of them sacrificed or became an exile. When I

enjoy these hard-earned privileges, I will always remember and respect those

true heroes who had fought for freedom and democracy.


另外請問大家有推薦的英文寫作書嗎?  我看到眾文出版社出了很多本

除了廖柏森老師的名著外，有其他的經典值得學習嗎？　謝謝

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