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※ 引述《wifemonkey (猴子婆)》之銘言：
: 大家好
: 小妹想應徵外國公司的業務專員.
: 以下是我的求職信.是否可以大家幫我看一下.
: 謝謝你們^+^
: Dear Ms. Lee,
: Your advertisement in 104 for an account sales specialist prompted me to
: apply for this position.
on prompts
: After I graduated from National Chung Hsing University with a Bechelor of
: Chemistry three years ago. I'd worked at family's company as an accounting
拿掉after Then I worked
: assistant for one year. And then, I'd worked at Merck Ltd.．Taiwan as a
Later I worked at
: customer care specialist. In addiion, I'm a proactive person, who is ready to
for [how long?].
換下一段: I am proactive and ready to learn anything needed
: learn anything will be needed.
: I don't feel that I should set my own salary, as I am pleased enough to have
: the privilege of working for you. However, I would consider a month
: satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.
可以不用前面那句
I would feel satisfied with one month compensation[stipend?] in probation
period. 我預設你第一個月試用期
: May I have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? I have
: enclosed my resume for more details about my background. Thank you very much.
: Sincerely,
I appreciate your consideration and look forward your response. My resume is
enclosed
Sincerely,
Name
: 有沒有哪裡需要修改的,請指教唷XDDD
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