[請益] 自己翻譯遇到的困擾(請入內)

[rebber (Tommy)]

[W] With a new store opening across the street, we’ll have to work harder to

compete in our market. We need to attract more customers to our store and

products.

[M] 關於對街的新開幕的商店，我們必須努力工作來維持市場的競爭力。我們需要吸引更

多的顧客來買我們的商店與購買產品。

[M] Perhaps our ads could show some of our satisfied customers and have them

talk about their experiences shopping with us. Ads like that are often

persuasive.

或許我們能夠在我們的廣告中刊出一些對我們公司滿意的顧客，並且請他們聊聊

與我們公司消費經驗。像這樣的廣告才會有說服力。

[W] What an inspired idea. Let’s get to work it right away. I’ll call a

photographer to come over and shoot pictures of people shopping in our store.

多麼有創造力的點子。 走我們立刻去實現它。我會打電話給攝影師要他來賣場請他拍攝

正在賣場消費的人們的照片。


1.不知道大意翻譯上有通順嗎?

2.we’ll have to work harder to compete in our market.

這一句話to compete要修飾哪裡阿? 這一句話真的困擾著我。



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→ DarkD:sry應該說修飾work harder比較正確
→ priv:這邊的with表示原因和理由
→ priv:所以翻成「由於」應該會比「關於」好
→ rebber:感謝D大與P大幫忙解決我的困擾。
→ rebber:With a new store opening across the street.
→ rebber:修正為:由於對街新開幕商店的原因