推 Realthugz:whatever the danger was是一塊的 08/25 09:50
→ Realthugz:that had first set populations blabla from it 08/25 09:51
→ Realthugz:came closer 08/25 09:51
Then, as food became more scarce, and whatever the danger was that had first
set populations on the move away from it came closer, the gangs became
dangerous, and when they passed through the suburbs of our city, people ran
inside and stayed out of their way.
出自 Doris Lessing 小說 The Memoirs of A Survivor
這句讀起來很不通順，請問紅色部分文法是否有問題?
拿掉was是否會比較好?
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