作者tintin1743 (Renee天天)
看板Eng-Class
標題[文法]試著用英文打網誌
時間Tue Sep 25 07:36:30 2012
Today~my host mother will be late when she finished work~so she told to me if I didn't want wait for her~I could make dinner to myself~and I used microwave to make this~because I worried my host mother when she watched me to open the gas stove~certainly~she didn't teach me yet~haaaaa~all in all~to made this just only spend 3 minute ~I called this to"mother and child egg"haaaa celebrate my first timeY(^_^)Y
If I used wrong grammar,please instruct to me~thx(︿ω︿)
請大大幫我糾正錯誤的地方>W<
希望可以更精進自己的文法X
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