[求譯] 人們一生甚至沒有好好活過

[Dorismm (Doris)]

部分人甚至一生都沒有好好活過

請問如果翻作

Some people didn't live even in their whole lifetime.


1
語法有錯誤嗎?

2
請問有更順暢或文藻更優美的譯法嗎?





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推 Deadshot465:Some people didn't even live well in their whole
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推 TOYHAHA:假如原PO的"好好活過"是指"認真的活"的話 也許可以用
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→ TOYHAHA:It is my life歌詞裡面有一句I just want to live while I
→ TOYHAHA:'m alive.
→ TOYHAHA:糟糕...好像有點錯誤= =+ 請原PO忽略我的推文
推 YNWA:Some people didn't even actually live their life.