[文法] 過去式??

[ele1325 (ele1325)]

中文語意：
有一天搭火車時，我看到一個老婦人在跟乘客借100元，他們可能在想她是不是騙子，
所以都沒有人願意借她錢，他們也許認為現在這個社會騙子太多了。在那時我也在掙
札，但是最後我還是沒給她錢。過了一陣子，我覺得很後悔當時沒有幫她，因為我仍
記得她當時是多麼無助和絕望。因此，我告訴自己以後如果再遇到這種情形，我不要
再這麼僅慎去判斷這個人是不是騙子。我寧願被騙，也不要因為其他真正的騙子讓我
變成一個冷血的人。

English：
One day when I was on a train, there was a old woman who was borrowing 100NT
from other passengers. Maybe passengers were wondering whether she was a
cheat, so nobody wanted to help her. They might think that nowadays there
were many cheats in our society. I was strggling at that moment; however,
I still didn't give  her money eventually. After that, I very regreted I
didn't help her because I still remembered how helpless and upset she was.
Thus, I told myself I would never judge a person so cautiously at this
kind of situation. I prefer to be cheated instead of being a unfeeling person
resulting from other real frauds.

問題：
1. 有人可以幫我改一下比較明顯錯誤的句子嗎??或是比較口語的說法
2. 在敘述過去經驗時，常常不確定"有一天"或"有一次"該怎麼講
   One day?? One time??
3. They might think that nowadays there were many cheats in our society.
   子句是還是用過去式嗎??但nowadays讓我覺得是不是該用現在式。
4. 「過了一陣子」用After that對嗎??還有其它說法嗎??

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→ priv:幾個比較單純的錯誤 1. "an" old woman
→ priv:2. very regreted，very 直接加動詞是錯的，可以用 very much
→ priv:至於不順和邏輯的問題看看有沒有強者願意幫忙...XD
→ priv:還有prefer to 後面用 instead of 不順
→ priv:請改成 rather than，動詞形式記得要改一下