[文法] 關係代名詞 which 作為受詞使用

[fclam (上來了)]

        寫文章的時候寫出了一句話
        "Only a few of them would like to take an oppotunity for
        higher level of education, which fewer of them can actually
        finish"
        原意是想說
        "他們之中只有很少的人會選擇更高的教育, 更少的人能夠完成它"

        想請問這個which的用法或是位置是否有甚麼錯誤??
        謝謝

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