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※ 引述《l10nel (小失)》之銘言: : 這一篇主要回應以下的看法: : http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1365735427.A.FAD.html : [tijj] The term 'native speaker' refers to a well-educated native speaker. : ... : 推 hopeliu:今天問了兩位系上教授,一位台灣元老籍,一位美國籍,都 04/12 21:24 : → hopeliu:說(A)是錯誤句,不能表示remote/tentative/hypothetical 04/12 21:25 : → hopeliu:的意思,要這樣表示就用if子句。 04/12 21:27 : http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1366088259.A.708.html : → tijj:當有whenever之意,if和when通常可交替代換,而又不改變原句意. 04/16 14:17 : → tijj:when要用在像if的hypothetical情況就是錯. 04/16 14:18 : → tijj:有whenever之意,if和when通常可交替代換,但這非hypothetical 04/16 14:20 : → tijj:原句A可以對,就是常被蛇咬, 但這不是r/t/h情況 04/16 14:22 : → tijj:什麼可以引出r/t/h情況,通常是 if (only), image if, or 04/16 14:25 : → tijj:suppose/supposing 而不是when! 04/16 14:26 : ... : → tijj:原句A可以選,但若又要硬拉成是r/t/h情況,這就不是標準英文. 04/16 14:29 : → tijj:還有,何謂假設法?好奇中文的對應英文是指什麼? subjunctive? 04/16 14:43 : → tijj:when為何可以執行subjunctive的功能?是if可以執行subjunctive 04/16 14:43 : → tijj:的功能. 應該要加以釐清. 04/16 14:44 : 以上反對者的說法大致綜合、重述如下: : when/whenever 在指涉未來不確定事件時,如果句意明確,可有 if 的「條件, 我說:"有whenever之意,if和when通常可交替代換" : conditional」語義,因此 if/when/whenever 可互換,「條件」意義不變。但是,即使 : 可以互換、意思不變,卻只有 if 這個字眼(或諸如 suppose, imagine 等字眼)可以和 我說: "什麼可以引出r/t/h情況,通常是 if (only), image if, or..." ^^^^^^ 我沒有說"只有if", 我說"通常是if..." : 過去式或 subjunctive 搭配使用,表達出 r/t/h 的情態,獨獨 when/whenever 這兩個 : 字眼,即使在和 if 同義的情況下,偏偏不得如此搭配。換句話說,誰使用了 : when/whenever + r/t/h,就是錯誤、不合文法,充其量不能算作標準英語。 我說:"原句A可以選,但若又要硬拉成是r/t/h情況,這就不是標準英文." 我講的對象是在講A句 "What would you do when you were bitten by a snake?" : 以上這樣重述反對觀點,沒有人反對吧? 我反對耶,我覺得我寫得很清楚了,不太需要幫我重述. : 本篇僅就實際語料之舉隅來回應。為求完整,將先前呈現過的來自書本的語料重覆一遍 : ,加註年份,後面再加入新的語料。少數例子雖來自網上部落格,大多儘量取自已出版書 : 本、論文、報章雜誌,避免反對者以「那不是英語母語者寫的,或者不是 : well-educated speaker 寫的」作為口實。 : 以下語料,全部都是 when/whenever 兩個字眼,帶有 if 的 conditional 語義,並搭配 : 過去式或 subjunctive-"were" 以表達對未來未發生事件的 r/t/h 情態(為凸顯重點和 : 語境,我將關鍵字改為 ALL-CAP): : (註:r/t/h 指 remoteness, tentativeness, hypotheticality) : [1] A Gentle Guide to Research Methods, Gordon Rugg, Marian Petre, 2007 : What WOULD you do WHEN it CAME to writing up your results, and those results : INCLUDED unpleasant truths about a group that you had come to like? IT'S : possible to end up feeling strong social bonds with the most unlikely : sounding individuals ... : [2] Chemical Engineering Design and Analysis: An Introduction, T. Michael : Duncan, Jeffrey A. Reimer, 1998 : What WOULD you do WHEN you ENCOUNTERED a new unit? But you DON'T need to : memorize operating equations. Instead, you NEED only learn how to create : tools to design and operate chemical engineering processes. Operating : equations ARE ... : [3] Essentials of Early Childhood Education, Carol Gestwicki, Jane Bertrand, : 2011 : Codes of Ethics : We noted earlier in the chapter that a profession has a code of ethics, which : is a statement of principle that governs moral behaviour and ethical : decisions. In Canada several professional organizations have developed code : of ethics statements for early childhood educators, to be used as a guide in : making day-to-day decisions. : Early childhood educators ARE frequently faced with ethical dilemmas in their : work with young children and their families: : ‧ What WOULD you do WHEN a parent DEMANDED to know who hit her child? : ‧ What WOULD you do WHEN a co-worker COMPLAINED to you about another : co-worker's treatment of a child? : ‧ What WOULD you do IF a neighbour TOLD you she heard bad things about the : last centre vou worked in? : ‧ What WOULD your responsibility be WHEN another teacher TOLD you that : symptoms made her suspect child abuse, but that she was afraid to report it? : Often, early childhood educators HAVE to take action in situations in which : all the facts ARE not known, or there IS no single course of action that is : clearly right or wrong. It IS sometimes difficult to decide what an ethical : response might be. : [4] http://antarabesque.wordpress.com/tag/books/ (某部落格) : Esther’s questions : 1. What music DO you put on when driving? : 2. What colour clothes DO you always buy? : 3. What sound just “MAKES your day”? : 4. What trip WOULD you like to make WHENEVER you HAD the chance? : 5. Which artist INSPIRES you? : [在一系列現在情境的問題中,有一問題用 whenever you had the chance,加入 r/t/h : 情態。] : [5] Keyshia and Clyde: A Novel, by Treasure E. Blue, 2008 (某言情小說) : "Think about it. You told me yourself that after all that shit happened you : changed, and Pops told me you never know when you change from a cucumber to a : pickle, and once you a pickle, you could never go back to being a cucumber." : "So you saying that I'm scarred for life and that I'm a pickle now?" asked : keyshia. : "No. I'm saying that if you stay carrying the fear and not address it, it's : a pretty good chance that you will turn into a pickle." Keyshia lay back in : silence. : Suddenly Clyde turned toward her and asked. "Baby, can I ask you a question?" : keyshia turned to face him and said, "Yeah, maybe." : He moved closer. "For real, yo, you got to be dead honest." : Keyshia knew he was serious and answered, "Yeah, but only if you answer the : same question." He nodded. : Clyde paused as if he were thinking of a way to form the question. "What IS : the biggest fear that you HAVE and ARE afraid to confront, and what WOULD you : do WHEN you finally FACED it?" : Keyshia was blown away by the depth of the question and took a moment to : think about it. Suddenly, she looked at Clyde and asked with a sneer on her : lips. "Do you really want to know?" : Clyde sat up and nodded, keyshia stared at the wall and spoke slowly and : measuredly. "I'D go down south and see the man who raped me and took my baby. : I'D ..." : [when you finally faced it? 是某人的直接問話,不經過間接引述,意指在假想世界中 : 面對恐懼,與現實中會不會、能不能面對無關。] : [6] Decisions and Orders of the National Labor Relations Board, 1996 : Jarvis related that about a week after the above conversation with Randall : Brown, while his job assignments were being continually changed. Rock came to : him while he was working at the back end of the hacking belt, picking up 10 : bricks at a time with tongs and putting them on the belt, and asked how much : longer was it going to take before he quit. : Employees Dennis Sowders, Rich Irwin, and Rich Carol, among others, : assertedly present at the time, did not testify. Jarvis answered, "WHENEVER : hell FROZE over." : [在過去敘事脈絡中,whenever hell froze over 是某人的直接回答,不經過間接引述。 : ] : [7] The General Theory of Employment, Interest and Money, John Maynard : Keynes, 1936 (英國經濟學家凱因斯著作) : http://www.marxists.org/reference/subject/economics/keynes/general-theory/ch21.htm : It APPEARS therefore, that we HAVE a sort of asymmetry on the two sides of : the critical level above which true inflation sets in. For a contraction of : effective demand below the critical level will reduce its amount measured in : cost-units; whereas an expansion of effective demand beyond this level will : not, in general, HAVE the effect of increasing its amount in terms of : cost-units. This result follows from the assumption that the factors of : production, and in particular the workers, are disposed to resist a reduction : in their money-rewards, and that there is no corresponding motive to resist : an increase. This assumption IS, however, obviously well founded in the : facts, due to the circumstance that a change, which is not an all-round : change, is beneficial to the special factors affected when it is upward and : harmful when it is downward. : IF, on the contrary, money-wages WERE TO fall without limit WHENEVER there : WAS a tendency for less than full employment, the asymmetry WOULD, indeed, : disappear. But in that case there WOULD be no resting-place below full : employment until either the rate of interest WAS incapable of falling further : or wages were zero. : [whenever there was ... 這條件句中的 was 是 r/t/h,而非指過去發生的事實,這可 : 從上下文看出,凱因斯在陳述一個假設性的經濟原理,而非過去發生了什麼事。而且,這 : 個 whenever there was 又包夾在一個更大的條件句 if ... were to 之中,這個 were : to 是 subjunctive-"were" 代表 r/t/h。第二段全段採用 r/t/h 情態,表達高度懷疑/ : 假設性,和第一段以現在式提出的 asymmetry 形成對比。] : [8] 台灣光華雜誌文章《守護海洋使者──中華白海豚》 : 對此,周蓮香認為可以「人工放流魚種」提供白海豚食物,來彌補棲地破壞導致的魚源損 : 失。至於噪音問題,台大海洋工程學系教授陳琪芳估計,工業港施工期在特定範圍內的打 : 樁噪音將影響海豚聽力,營運時期的船舶進出等噪音可能降低白海豚發聲溝通的距離,迫 : 使牠們花費更多能量覓食或找尋同伴。因此施工時需在現場進行水下錄音,長期監測海豚 : 的出沒狀況,若有過大噪音,或有白海豚出現在受影響區域內時,將採取停工或暫停船隻 : 出入等減緩措施。 : (中譯英)Professor Chen Chi-fang of the Department of Engineering Science : and Ocean Engineering at National Taiwan University FEELS that noise : generated by piledriving during construction of an industrial harbor could : damage the hearing of dolphins within the immediate area, and noise from : vessels entering and leaving the harbor once it was in operation would : probably shorten the radius within which the humpback dolphins can : communicate by sonar, thus forcing them to expend more energy in searching : for food or their companions. Hence it would be necessary to take underwater : sound recordings during construction and do long-term tracking of the : presence of dolphins. She SUGGESTS suspending work or temporarily halting : entry and exit of ships to and from the harbor IF noise WERE TO reach : excessive levels, or WHENEVER a dolphin SHOWED UP within the area affected by : the noise. : [這裡出現 if 和 whenever 並用。最後一句如果改寫成 whenever noise {were to : reach, reached} excessive levels, or if a dolphin showed up ...,意思也不變。 : if/when/whenever + 過去式或 subjunctive r/t/h 完全可以在適當情境下互換。] : [9] Kiplinger's Personal Finance (理財雜誌), 1994 : Taxes in reverse : Just WHEN you WERE WONDERING why THERE'S so much complaining about this form, : HERE'S the kicker. If your employee's household income IS less than $23,753 : in 1994 and he or she supports a child, the employee is eligible for the : advance earned income credit (EIC). EIC is basically a negative income tax. : The IRS pays the taxpayer... : [10] Knowledge and organization in the innovation process, Roberto Mazzoleni, : Stanford University Dept. of Economics, 1994 : ...to disregarding the uncertainties that pervade the innovation process. : Insofar as the firm's knowledge is incomplete, the focus of the firm's : attention structure will be shaped by subjective beliefs about what : information is important to seek for. Such beliefs ARE not unchanging. : Experience CAN provide new information, and induce changes in the held : representation of the environment. WHENEVER this WERE TO BE the case, the : informational sources towards which the attention structure of the firm IS : oriented WILL also change. : Spender (1989) correctly emphasizes the existence of a theory of observation : according to which the empirical evidence IS selectively monitored and : interpreted. This LEADS us into a discussion of the relevance of : imformativeness of information, which logically requires the pre-existence of : a theory. : [11] A comparative view of Christianity and of the other forms of religion : which have existed, and still exist, in the world, particularly with regard : to their moral tendency; by William Laurence Brown, 1826 : It IS, therefore, to be confidently expected, that these obstructions WILL be : ultimately removed, and "the power of God and the wisdom of God," for the : present and eternal happiness of mankind, unfold their complete and beatific : energy. As these obstructions have been occasioned chiefly by human : ignorance, prejudice, or depravity, we MAY, by discovering the peculiar : manner in which these have operated, be led to ascertain the most effectual : means of curing the evil; or, if this BE impracticable in the present state : of human nature, at least of investigating its immediate causes. Only when : this glorious result SHALL BE obtained, WILL human happiness be distinctly : apprehended and firmly established. Christianity, exerting its complete moral : energy on the principles and conduct of its professors, COULD not fail, : WHENEVER this WERE the case, to improve in the highest degree the civil : condition of mankind. It WOULD, on the one hand, eradicate the first : principles of tyranny and abuse of power; and, on the other, extinguish the : spirit of sedition, tumult, and rebellion. : [12] : http://globalpoliticsblog.com/2012/11/26/the-foreign-policy-of-the-dprk-ideology-nuclear-deterrence-and-regime-survival/ : 2012 (某政治部落格) : What this means for foreign policy is that the manner in which states : perceive themselves, their role in the international system, as well as their : conception of the actors around them dictators [sic] their interests and : actions (Houghton, 2007, p.29). Similarly, material value of interests IS : discounted; identity and norms SHAPE your interest, for it IS these normative : ideas that connect a certain value to a given interest, threat or courses of : action. For example, increases in power by an ally ARE viewed as less : disturbing as WHEN this WERE the case with an adversary (Weldes, 1996, : p.282). An example of this WOULD be that the United States IS deeply : concerned over the nuclear ambitions of Iran, yet DOES NOT worry over the : ambiguity surrounding the nuclear program of Israel, it IS the same material : (a nuclear weapon), yet two completely different meanings ARE attached to : this based on the worldview of the United States, which flows from its : identity. : [13] http://arxiv.org/abs/hep-th/0010079 (page 21) : Renormalization Constant of the Color Gauge Field as a Probe of Confinement, : 2000, by Masud Chaichian, Kazuhiko Nishijima (某物理學論文) : This, in turn, means that such Green’s functions would be multi-valued : functions of α, Then a question is raised of whether Green’s functions : involving only BRS invariant operators be also multi-valued. WHEN this WERE : the case, c.c. MIGHT be realized only in the domain D(-infinitiy), so that : Z(subscript 3) (raised to the power of -1) = 0 WOULD represent a necessary : and sufficient condition for c.c., but it has not been clarified yet IF it : WOULD really be the case. : We may close this section by concluding that c.c. is realized in QCD provided : that color symmetry is not spontaneously broken and AF is valid. : [it has not been clarified yet if it would really be the case 完全確認了前面的 : when this were the case 不是指過去情況,何況這又是 subjunctive-"were"。] : [14] Pride and Prejudice, Jane Austen, 1813 傲慢與偏見,珍·奧斯汀 : Elizabeth was chiefly struck with his extraordinary deference for Lady : Catherine, and his kind intention of christening, marrying, and burying his : parishioners WHENEVER it WERE required. : (某中譯)伊麗莎白聽到他對咖苔琳夫人尊敬得那麼出奇,而且他竟那麼好心好意,隨時 : 替他自己教區裡的居民行洗禮,主持婚禮和喪禮,不覺大為吃驚。 : [在全篇過去式的敘事脈絡中,此句使用了 subjunctive-"were",表達 r/t/h。如果 : Jane Austen 原本將 were 寫成 was (也沒錯),就看不出這 was 是純粹指過去時間 : 的過去式,還是 帶有 r/t/h,但這裡形式既是第三人稱單數主詞 + subjuctive-"were" : ,那就無疑是 r/t/h 情態。] : [15] http://www.bartleby.com/3/1/11.html : Essays, Civil and Moral, Francis Bacon 法蘭西斯·培根 (1561–1626) : Of Great Place : MEN in great place are thrice servants: servants of the sovereign or state; : servants of fame; and servants of business. So as they have no freedom; : neither in their persons, nor in their actions, nor in their times. It is a : strange desire, to seek power and to lose liberty: or to seek power over : others and to lose power over a man’s self. The rising unto place is : laborious; and by pains men come to greater pains; and it is sometimes base; : and by indignities men come to dignities. The standing IS slippery, and the : regress IS either a downfall, or at least an eclipse, which IS a melancholy : thing. Cum non sis qui fueris, non esse cur velis vivere [When a man FEELS : that he IS no longer what he was, he HAS no reason to live longer]. Nay, : retire men CANNOT WHEN they WOULD, neither WILL they WHEN it WERE reason; but : ARE impatient of privateness, even in age and sickness, which require the : shadow; like old townsmen, that will be still sitting at their street door, : though thereby they offer age to scorn. : [這裡有大陸版中譯:http://www.en8848.com.cn/read/proseessay/life/132363.html : 關鍵句意思:人們在願意退休時不能退,在應該退休時也不肯退。整句、整段脈絡明顯是 : 假設一種境況,而非過去發生過的事實。句中 when they would 的 would 是一般動詞 : will (願意、意欲)的過去式,表 r/t/h,when it were reason 的 were 又是一個 : 第三人稱單數主詞 + subjunctive-"were",也是 r/t/h。] : [16] The Southwestern Reporter, Volume 65, 1902 : BURGESS, J. This is an appeal by defendant from a conviction and sentence of : death passed upon her on a charge by Indictment of having feloniously : administered to her husband, Frank Nesenhener. a large quantity of a certain : deadly poison, called "morphine," from the effects of which he died. Several : points are urged for a reversal of the Judgment, but, from the view that we : take of the case, it will only be necessary to pass upon one, as it goes to : the very foundation of the Judgment; that is, the want of substantial : evidence to support it, in the absence of which it cannot be permitted to : stand. : In Wills, Circ. Ev. (3d London Ed.) 205, it is said: "UPON GENERAL : PRINCIPLES, however, it CANNOT be doubted that courts of law WOULD require : chemical evidence of poisoning, WHENEVER it WERE attainable; and in that case : it WOULD seem but reasonable, in analogy to the general rules of evidence, : that it SHOULD be of the highest character which the nature of the case : admits. At least, a conviction CANNOT be satisfactory if it BE grounded upon : evidence of an inferior nature, where evidence of a more satisfactory : character IS capable of being adduced." It cannot be doubted but that in case : of morphine poisoning the most satisfactory and convincing evidence of : poisoning is the discovery by analysis of the contents of the stomach, the : existence of morphine, or traces of it. and. in case of uraemic poison, by an : analysis of the urine. In Wills, Circ. Ev. 388 (by Arthur P. Wills), it is : said: "Evidence of chemical tests applied to the body or its contents or : excreta, WHENEVER it IS capable of being obtained, ought to be adduced; and : in such circumstances the failure to adduce such evidence, unexplained by a : satisfactory reasons, GIVES serious ground for doubt as to the reality of the : alleged poisoning. The reagents employed must be free from all impurities, if : any importance IS to be attached to the result obtained." In the case in hand : there was no examination of any kind made either of the stomach, or its : contents, bowels, or urine, while there was no apparent reason why one or : both should not have been done; and these matters, so important to the : ascertainment of the cause of tbe death of the deceased, are entirely : wanting. On the symptoms, and these alone, with the exception of a few : suspicious acts upon the part of the accused, the judgment of conviction : rests. : [第二段,Southwestern Reporter 兩次引用的 Wills 著作 Circumstantial Evidence, : 大約是 1870 年後的出版物。第一次引文出現 would ... whenever it were attainable : ,第二次引文出現 whenever it is capable of being obtained,兩者完全同義,都 : 在陳述「法律應該根據具體證據來作判決」這個歷時不變的原則,並非第一次指過去發生 : 的事,第二次指未來的可能性。這又是一個代表 r/t/h 的 subjunctive-"were"。] 先聲明,我並沒有一一檢查,縱使你的句子全對如你理解的那樣 [1]~[16]甚至及其它句子,到底何時可以parallel蛇咬句,何時不行, 可以去虛心請教師長們, 我相信必會有所收穫. : 以上實例,語域範圍從言情小說、口語對話到專業領域、嚴肅論述皆有之,而且後者居多 : ,這應該足以顯示 when/whenever + r/t/h 不是那種僅限低下階層那種阿貓阿狗的口語 : (可被「攻擊」為文法鬆散隨便)的用法吧。 沒有任何人說這樣就是"那種阿貓阿狗的口語", 這是你自己說得. : If, suppose, imagine 等字眼才可以 r/t/h,但 when/whenever 在和 if 同義可互換時 : ,卻偏偏不能有 r/t/h?這想法本身,光是說出來給人聽,或用常理想想,就已顯得疑點 : 重重,更別說沒有理論基礎了。 我已經說了, 我沒說有: "If, suppose, imagine 等字眼『才』可以" : 以上這些作者,難道他們發表的這些句子都是不標準的英語,甚至是不合文法的英語?還 : 是反對者對英語少見多怪、採取自由心證、一副「想當然耳」的姿態,無視真實世界母語 : 作家寫出來的英語,光憑「語感」自創和現實脫節的「英語規則」?各位想想何者比較有 : 可能? : 試問:你對英語的語感、理解、掌握,難道好過 Bacon、Keynes、Austen 等作家? 我贊同這句. 所以才該更請教師長們,而不是一直自我解譯,而不是未經確認,就擅自引用文法書 來背書自己的語境. http://www.ptt.cc/bbs/Eng-Class/M.1367499526.A.030.html 多位專家學者與文法作者都說你的說法是ungrammatical了 : 回答:That will/would be the case if/when/whenever hell freezes/froze over or : if/when/whenever pigs fly/flew! ※ 編輯: tijj 來自: 146.115.61.107 (05/13 16:45)
sitifan: 05/14 18:17
hopeliu:好奇如果是英系學者,怎麼看待原先的語境? 05/17 23:54
※ 編輯: tijj 來自: 146.115.61.107 (05/18 00:53)