[請益] 想問問看 這樣的語意通不通順

[geili (geili)]

some of websites contained too much information, like Yahoo(One of

the biggest website), that makes people hard to find the stuff

what they want.

這句話這樣寫OK嗎

感謝各位

--
※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) 
◆ From: 128.238.249.143
→ priv:以你想表達的意思contain 應該沒必要用過去式
→ priv:除非你想表達的是現在不是這樣
→ priv:第二就是請寫 find what they want
→ priv:the stuff what 就重覆了
推 areca:, that makes...--> , which makes...
→ yangivy:one of the biggest website"s"
→ iamx:makes people hard to find是說人很難找  你要說
→ iamx:make it hard for people to find what they want.
→ iamx:正式寫作的話請避免泛用stuff
→ iamx:Some of the websites, like Yahoo, contain too much info
→ iamx:that makes it hard for people to find what they are looki
→ iamx:ng for.
→ sneak: , that make https://daxiv.com
→ sneak: m
→ sneak: ake it har https://muxiv.com
→ muxiv: that makes  https://moxox.com