[請益] 上班第一天用mail自我介紹

[olyvia (Olyvia)]

我要準備去公司報到了，想說寫封簡短的信讓大家知道我是新來的！
可以幫我看一下這樣寫是否OK？
ps.我一直不知道用Dear all到底合不合適，但我想不到更好的字了。


Dear all,

My name is Olyvia, a newly Business Assistant in Service Dept.
I am not familiar with this new job at this moment.
Please do not hesitate to inform me if you have any question.

Wish to get along well with everyone.

Best regards,
Olyvia

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→ jacqueswu:I'm not~之後建議都刪掉
推 tomho1202:I m not 之後真的不要
→ olyvia:所以只要說我叫olvyia，是新來的業助就可以了，其它都不必?
→ olyvia:那Wish~~~everyone這邊也刪嗎？
→ schlafen:wish那句或許改成Have a great day!
→ jacqueswu:可加這句It is my great honour to work with you.
→ olyvia:好的！謝謝各位！
→ linih2002:I am not....示弱的東西, 不要
→ linih2002:用比較POSTIVE..work hard...make efforts to..讓人認同