[請益] 英文自介幫看謝謝

[stevehi (steve)]

  It's my pleasure for me to introduce myself. I'm XXX, I come from Yunlin,

I graduated from National XX University with Master's Degree and graduated

from National XX University with Bachelor Degree. I majored in Chemical

Engineering. In schooling, I learned the specialized knowledge and the

abilities to solve problems during the research and experiment procedure.

  In my free time, I like playing badminton. It can release my pressure

through the vigorous exercise. The most important of all, I made best friends

when I participated the games.

  Talking about my personality, optimistic and easy-going are the suitable

descriptions for me. With any challenge I face it with positive attitude. I

will do my best to reach goals no matter how difficult they are.

  I sincerely hope that I can be offered such a good opportunity. Thanks

for your attention.

以上為自己準備的口頭自介,  希望各位大大幫忙修改一下!!謝謝


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→ stevehi:謝謝sky大大!!