[文法] 一小段對話被說文法錯很多orz

[diddy (掛網中請勿拍打餵食)]

雖然我很久沒碰英文了
但感覺都是很簡單的文法
不知道所謂的錯很多錯在哪 ˊ口ˋ

為了表示誠意...如果幫忙找出一個錯誤  奉上微薄的50P  謝謝 >"<

Choco: This birthday cake looks so good, I think I should give it a try.

Lee: Oh, it's very delicious. The roast chicken is delicious.
     Maybe you can try some!

Choco: Sure! Thank you! I'll try some. By the way, my name is Choco.
       Nice to meet you.

Lee: I'm Lee. Nice to meet you, too.
     I'm a chef work in the restaurant next street.
     You look so young...What do you do? Are you still student?

Choco: Yes, I'm studying in Japanese now.
       The star and I are classmates of collage. How about you?

Lee: Oh, I'm his elder brother. Hey, your basketball shoes are very cool!
     Are you interesting in basketball?

Choco: Yes! I like Michael Jordan the most. And you? What's your hobby?

Lee: I enjoy cooking. All my friend love what I cook.
     My dream is to be a great cook.

Choco: That sounds great!
       Oops, sorry, I have to go to find my friends. I lost them for a moment.

Lee: Sure, do you need some help? What are they wearing?

Choco: They are both tall and thin, wearing in white and black hats.

Lee: I saw them in the toilet 5 minutes before.
     Maybe you can find them that way.

Choco: Thank you! Nice talking to you. See you later!

Lee: Me too. See you later!

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※ 編輯: diddy           來自: 111.253.93.246       (10/28 04:18)
→ monet99:I'm a chef work in the restaurant next street. 雙動詞
→ monet99:，其實真的蠻多的....
→ kee32:你大概要準備一千批喔......
→ diddy:B大幫我改文法的確有錯的部份算起來是六個  沒有到1000P吧XD
→ diddy:但他好認真的幫忙改!  所以我包了稅前整數1000P以示感激
推 kee32:對呀，你這麼有誠意，人家回答的也爽。太多人把這當成英文
→ kee32:提款機了，問了問題就跑…
→ diddy:真的超感謝B大的  還幫我解惑一些不清楚的地方  人真好!>_<