[求譯] 論文題目翻譯

[deathwomen (綠茶啾一下)]

我的中文題目是：

改變中英茶葉貿易的科學調查──植物獵人福瓊(Robert Fortune)的茶樹調查與移植

以下是我的試譯：

The tea trade between China and Britain that scientific investigation
changed: the investigation and transplantation of tea plant by Robert Fortune

我覺得好冗長哦，而且investigation出現兩次，用by是不是不太對？
麻煩各位解惑，感恩
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→ areca:transplantation of tea plant
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